Which Side Are You On? (Ken Loach, 1985)
Loach’s great documentary about the ‘84 miner’s strike. Must watch.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
War is peace
Freedom is slavery
Ignorance is strength
Am I doing poetry right?
I give it a 4/10 not enough oceans and nature and vivid imagery and universal human experience, i like the rhymth m of your langagueg though
you need to drop an indirect reference to some historical event via an analogy, too. a hurricane or some towers shit, or the ultimate ref to holocaust imagery. starving children work, too. as do the spicy colors of The Orient.